Wow that was a wonderful write different from all ur other writes..

And any reader can say it wasa written in a jolly & best of mood with hope n happiness in it..

Gr8 work, enjoyed reading it..

Keep sharing ur thoughts thru more wonderful poems 2 follow...

With best wishes..

Karan

I love this poem because of all the pure love that flows from it. but some of the rhymes seemed forced. they didnt quite fit in with it and knocked the flow off a bit.
the lenght could have been what made the rhymes forced cuz at the begining you were doing great! but as it got longer the flow and rhymes started to be a lil' off. maybe if you shorten it and condence your words but keep all the feeling it would be better. Im not sure.
but i love it all the same and give you a 5/5

Overall, a really good poem. A poem of feelings that are expressed so beautifully. You did a very excellent job expanding on such a simple title. However, I think you can do better than that. I Love You is a very easy title to use, I think you should use something more interesting, to get the readers to be more interesting in reading your poem. Your poem was very interesting.. however.. when I started to read it. Beginning to end - everything was well expressed. Of course no love poem is perfect, but yours was good. 5/5

WOW!!! This is by FAR a wonderfully well written poem. SUCH powerful emotion in here and I loved reading it. VERY WELL DONE. Please keep sharing your poems because you are a VERY GIFTED writer and it most CLEARLY shows.

Have a WONDERFUL DAY!!!

"Bring it baby to the ground,
Let's beat this world with our sound"
Wondeful start

and these lines just says alot
"So lets make a change and spread love so true,
Every single day I just want to be with you.
You're the endless path that shows only hope,
You're the care of life that leads none to mope.

You're the strength within that cannot die,
You're the totality of life that leads no lie.
You're the inspiration around which these words flow,
As divine and light as the first flakes of winter snow."

it's so wonderful when you tell the person your love what he means to you

Loved it! Rhymes well and nicely matched lines that have same amount of syllables. I think theres a term for that but watever, it was very nice.

Truely deep great feel and upbeat i love it

Though I don't like love poems but this one is an exception.

Its so intense, filled with real feelings......
As if you're truly in love.......