Sensational. I just love it. Your poetic device is amazing. I love the structure.
Well Done, Ingrid. I hope to see more.

~Chinwe~
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Beautiful write. I loved the ending. As inspiring and as mesmirizing as it was, I still care to re-read it. :) I hope you write more soon. :) Take care!

5/5

Bri~

Great flow, very well written. 5/5

That lovely piece of poem is really somthing i hope for my lover ,

hope that he see th true love , adn that love was alwasy here,

how a happy thought you have , simple but yet unreachable in real life maybe , for most of us ,

in all the poem structure could be more good , i felt it abit weaker in structure than the your previous ones, !!

great feeling flow , adn idea jsut amaize more adn more