Wow sisha, this poem is really wonderful. it is exactly me, I always pretend that I am fine and keep smiling while inside me I am completely shattered.

Another great poem
it touched my heart
it has deep meanings

Love this poem, wrote somthing a little similar too, so i get your drift, nice write xp,Thank you for your nice comments too, x

The rhyming and flow of this poem is great. It is also easy to understand. I liked this poem it was sad.

Sasha, i loved it.
It was like those words were meant for me.
Like HEBA, every day i smile a fake smile and pretend my life and my heart are perfectly fine, when inside im crying, the smile gone, life broken, and my heart torn. This was really good.
Keep it up!
*Chaotic Angel*

Thanks for the comment Ashley!

I can feel the emotions within the costume.I like how you portray the other side of the coin of the clown's life.The choice of words that you used did indeed bring out the character out from the poem. Absolutely stunning poem;)

Wow. Not what I first expected. I like how you start out and leave the audience thinking that it really is a real clown you are talking about but then as the line
"I wear white diamonds and shiney pearls."
comes we get more and more unsure. But as soon as you start to say that we see your name on magazines, it is blatantly obviouse. It is the celebrities that you are comparing to the clowns. How every day they go through their lives, hiding in a mask of what they want people to see, how no one really knows exactly who they are.

I love it. In the thought, in the flawless rhyme and definately in surprising conclusion. Well written, great job. 5/5