I beleve youj should change the bet in the frist line to BED right??
and i can see strucutre is geting better n but sti;; not good rhyming

I really like this poem(:
The flow is really good, keep it up!

*5/5

This is a very good poem...i really enjoyed this!! keep up the good work

5/5

Very very good 5/5 just change bet into bed

Love it im givin it a 5

Good rhythm to this poem.