"The way I love you will make people jeolose"
``Jealous not jealose.

"My love for you is bigger than world"
``Add the between than and world.

"Your the best think that ever happend me
``You're not your.
``Thing not think.
``Happened not happend.
``Put to in between happened and me.

Overall, a pretty good poem. Cliche, but that's no biggy.. because all love poems are cliche. You expressed your feelings oh-so-well, but had some grammar mistakes that were very obvious - Not good. I guess work on the flow too, there wasn't much of one here. 3/5.

You exspressed very well. -5-

Awwwww love this poem great job 5/5

Wow!! so sweet. I just love it... Nice job..