Comments : Voices

  • 15 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Wow Hailey!
    I can relate i've heard so many voices and people just said its all in my head...
    great poem good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok this si creepy feelings , frist i dont know who are these vouices , but i assure you at least we care if you do it , so dont !!
    second , if i had these voices i would own a gun and shoot them if they open their mouth again,
    i used to have them and i shoot the dam things and rest all my life,
    as a poem it si good ,
    need structrue and rhyming but as expression we get waht you want to say !!
    so fix it when those voices stop

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    This poem makes me sad :[

  • This is good poem...i liked it...