Comments : Missing You Already

  • 11 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    A very nice poem, so sweet. This person is lucky that you have found them, hopefully they know that. good luck.

  • 10 years ago

    by mandy

    What a very sad poem. Very beautifuly written. I felt the longing within your words. I also enjoyed the format you chose.

    The only things I suggest would be not to capitalize everytime you start a new line. It makes the poem seem choppy.

    Great write! Keep it up!

    mandy:)