All I wanted was your love
instead you gave me the door.
Now here I am alone and fragmented
malfunctioning viciously
without you
broken without hope
now in the end
do you dare to be despair?

Those words affected me the most...they were really so touchable...U didnt keep the rhyme but I see it was awesome..
Keep up the good work..

This poem reminds me of so many of my old relationships......and this is a really good poem....I love it!

I agree with both Goth marionette and Julie Raab. What goth marionette had said that you didn't keep the rhyme, but poems don't have to rhyme. it was really good! you're a really talented writer!!