This is really sad! really good though.
Sweet and true.

Just one mistake:

"This pain is something you cannot undue"
^^ think you mean "undo"

But great work.
xx

Keep writing, it makes us all feel better when we're down, and better still when we're feeling good

Julia this is amazing, honestly. Definitely one of the best things you've written. the emotions were very clear...the last stanza was my favorite by far...absolutely lovely, babe. *hugs*

I think the poem is very good n well written. it seems very emotional though