Awwww thatz really cute. I love it. =)

I really liked this short and sweet!

Good try and a good poem. Yes it's sweet. But instead of writing 'ill' write it properly 'i'll'
That will make it much better. Keep writing.

I love this poem it is so cute and it is cute because waiting for someone you love is the sign of true love...good luck=]

I slowly go insane <- switch I with slowly .
As every night i dream of you
But what ever you do
I'll be here for you <- and switch the 3rd line after but and fourth line , because then you're not rhyming you and you .

Day after day
I think of you <- add its true ? again to avoid rhyming you and you .
Where ever you go
I'll be waiting for you

The rest of the poem works out nice enough . I love the idea .. And i can relate to it really easy . 4/5