"I don't believe that i should wake wake up a hallow shell day after day hoping not to be alone."

this line you put wake twice, I don't know if you did that for the poem or you didn't realized it was there, but other than that this poem was great. It felt like the only thing you want is love but it seems that everyday when you wake up it doesn't seem like its going to happen. It will sweetie =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Kate

This works really well very palpable, the sadness is portrayed very well, believable!

Well done