I really liked this poem alot. what I got out of it when I was reading it, is no matter what kinda way you are going there will be someone going to save you, no matter if they are the right person to do so or the wrong person the mistakes show and the past stays. its sorta saying that you want the certain someone just to save yourself.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

God. Thanks for putting these words out there, Lex. Cuz i didn't know how to say it..you pretty much put into words how i'm feeling. this is great. i love repetition, when it's done well, and this was done beautifully. great job, hon. pure emotion. <3

I think this poem might have had a better ring to it if it was a rhyming poem. However, I thought the repetition was great and gave it a really great impact. Great writing.

Sole x

You are ther one
you've been waiting for.