This is an interesting poem. I don't see where it was suposed to go though.

In all your poems.. this poem is what really struck me... the sincerity... words from the heart... keep it up....

5/5

I loved the part,

I will plant you inside my heart
Maybe tomorrow you will grow to be another dream

It was pretty good. Not my favorite, but the emotions were displayed well and it had a nice sad ring to it. It had that sort of feeling of hope something more will come, but until that day all you'll feel is loneliness.

Gorgeous poem. the visionary aspects of it are beautiful and its very heartfelt.

*^*Crow*^*

Strange... but nice lol :] haha

keep up the good work! 5/5

It is a sweet poem.

Its beautiful. great poem, nice work moucha. i love it... ^_^

One da best i've seen!
You really are turnin keen!

**I will plant you inside my heart
Maybe tomorrow you will grow to be another dream***

loved that part.. it was really touching. the whole poem wasn't planned.. or any use of complicated words.. it just came right out.. thats what i like about it.. its just came from the heart..

I loved this piece it was so packed with passion and was just a genuinely powerful piece, your words stuck with me and i found myself captivated to read on. it was beautiful in its own sad way which showed your true emotions. i loved this piece, it was an excellent write from start 2 finish. 5/5

But what I can give you?
I am just somebody you will forget
I feel my heart empty in a sweep

^^So much resignation within these words...but you are right: sometimes we just lose the one we love and there is no turning back.
You did a good job in portraying your emotions.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I like it