Wow, another fantastic poem.

the 2 last stanzas are my favs

5/5! keep it up =]

~tia

Very beautfully written your an artist at work

you like what you do and you do it beqautifully i think...

nice work
keep it up

i have a poem called i think i sound a bit bitter
but its cool its not exspressing me though it just came to me anyhow
good work!

brittany:]

Woah-this was really well written!
Very deep and very emotive.

Great work.

5/5

Aish

That was an incredible piece of work

Thank You. =]