This was from the heart, and that is what makes it good. I know how u feel. Keep writing from your heart.

Awwww, i can relate (kind-of) but I love it.

Very well put. I like the rhyming and how it all flows together so nicely. The message came through loud and clear, but there was much depth within each word you wrote. Fantastic job, 5/5!

-mandy :)