Very nice! Love has always been represented by flowers, and you wrote it in a way to express the beauty of love as well as its risks in the form of a rose. i liked that a lot. Excellent flow as well. 5/5!

Now this was a much better write!! You didn't hold back and you wrote with your heart. You let your emotions do the writing instead of your mind and it brought power to this piece. I liked the flow and the rhyme they were both nice additions to a well written poem :)