Did your guy read this???? hmm im sure hell be deeply touched if you let him read this!!!.. very good! nice. can't say anything!

You made me smile while reading your work.... this one is truely a product of creativity. you it's not easy to say things freely while focusing on rhyming, but you did it.. and this work is worth appreciating.. thanks and pls write some more... =jc=

Hey... i never thought i was the one who first write comment on this poem.... its praising your poem the 2nd time... lol