Very well written i really love this poem you did a wondeful job !

This is so true. Ive been through it all. Whatever does kill us only makes us stonger. Remember that. Life isnt always fair.

I really love this poem...
This is beautiful...
One of my favorites...

Welll , i have much to say here, :

frist on structure, the poem feelings and subject and the wy you describe it make it very intresting , to read
you should split to paragraph and work the rhyming through ,

but as the content of this poem since it is true ,
i might add somthing if i may ,
remmber girl it is my belef ins some way , that if 2 pepole are met to be together , no force on earth can stop , and if they dont , no matter how all the world try , they wont

second , cuts, and depression , are not the way to healing girl , if they are all humans would do it ,
we be sad we greef but we get over it and continue our lifes,

we keep the memories, of a hapy day , so we can live another day !!

This is an awsome poem
it did relate to me a couple months ago
but i learned that i don't need a boy in my life to make me happy
and well for the girl he left me for, well we used to be best friends, until she stole him
i realised if he left me for her than hes not worthy enough for me.
me n my ex bf is now just a friend, its hard to trust her though, but i still love her.
oh n thanx for the comment.