This is your best poem, it think[that i've read]
amazing!!
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Great expression , and very good desciption

mm you focus a bit on the eyes more then the others, i could relate to my life where i wait to be unflod when somone love me and choose me

you are very good i like this poem you can relate to many things with it

goof work

This was amazing :]
Nice work!

5/5

Supurb work. I just love it. The Poetic Device, the structure, layout. It's amazing! You have my vote and i hope i have yours!

5/5

Wow!!! this was amazing! it had so much like emotion, and power!!

great job!

<3 Aly

I Loved it 5/5

..very unique! i loved it...

Wow. I really liked it :)
I loved the wording, it had a great flow.
An over all great piece.
5/5 for sure :)
Keep it up.
xx

Love it keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

Wow thats is sad at first i thought you were talking about an old woman
good

kiwi

wanna read mine

Wow... very well written... so sad though ;[

5/5

Great usage of imagery, i could fully imagine this desolate, lonely doll. a great read, thanks for sharing!

This poem is strong in emotion and a very original topic.I feel as if many of us in this world are like the "china doll" persay.We are all waiting for someone to take us off of our shelves.The format was good and the word choice was smooth and basic.Very good.5/5

-Amber-

Good one, 5/5 all the way. love the way you put it. kind of inspires me right now.

My gosh. This is amazing. ^.^ I really have no words for how much I like this. It was truly aweinspiring. (I prby spelt that wrong) I'm enviouse right now. 6/5

**Bri