U r so close to me in writing dark stuff...I do love ur original,different style in expressing those kinda thoughts..
Plz keep up that good work...wish ya good luck...
* Hugs *..

I love the words used in this, it causes such a mood and feeling for this piece. Great job. :)

Children of satisfying edge
impede to alter threshold site,
frozen, unmoving, inert to be immovable,
the essence of their animosity
lead to their depravity,

My favorite lines. This was dark and original. Well done, great imagination