Omg im so sorry for what had happened but things like this happen all the time and i hope you are going to be ok i am sure you will keep your head up tall and dont ever let that fall!! I loved this great emotions and flowed great!

Wow! This is beautiful, you put so much emotions in the ending and that made it so much intense. Each feeling that you expressed through the piece is deep and it reflects your ache.
I am most impressed with the fact that you managed to absolutely fascinate me trough simplicity of your words, and you described on a very good way love which transforms into pain.
I am sorry if you are lost in these emotions but piece is still amazingly written.
Great work, truly sad at the same time.