Lovely poem.
This is deeply touching from the beginning to the end. I think that you expressed your emotions excellently. The rhythm and flow of the poem are flawless and you did good job with rhymes.
This poem sounds so personal and sincere, like it's written straight from the heart which makes the impact of described emotions so powerful and gives extra effect to the piece. Truly nicely done.

Aww so cute, made me smile all the way through it :)

i loved this line "The journey is the happiness not the destination"... i agree with this so much, but also knowing what the destination is, makes the whole journey worthwhile in a sense... just getting to where youve always wanted to be, your destination, is one of the greatest feelings you could ever feel, i think :)

5/5 keep writing baby i love you

Aww so cute, made me smile all the way through it :)

i loved this line "The journey is the happiness not the destination"... i agree with this so much, but also knowing what the destination is, makes the whole journey worthwhile in a sense... just getting to where youve always wanted to be, your destination, is one of the greatest feelings you could ever feel, i think :)

5/5 keep writing baby i love you

Oh my bad for submitting that 12 times haha

"Never given a chance, always destined to fail,
Made believers out of ourselves and others,
Said we'd never prevail, useless to no avail,
Love is possible, only in the heart of another's."
Those were my favorite lines. They made this piece what it was, in my opinion.

I adore this poem. It's cute and powerful. It shows your emotions very well.

The flow was great, the vocabulary was sweet and touching. It fit with the subject well. None of your rhymes seem forced. They all make this more beautiful.
Amazing!

Lexie

The whole flow of the poem is just amazing Not forgetting the remarkable ending that derives all the way from the other stanzas
keep it up :)