Wow that is really good!!

That was really good. I hope that you really didn't have to go through anything like that, but if you did, I hope that you've gotten over it and have moved on. Everything happens for a reason and it's our jobs to either never let it go or forget it and move on with our lives. And I know that both are hard to do. This poem was great. 5/5

This was very good and very detailed. I'm guessing this is a true story..and to write about something like this takes a lot. You did a good job though. Writing from personal expiriences is not easy. I could definatly feel as a reader what you were going through while this happened to you. Well done. 5/5.

Woow..this was really, like, gosh i dont even have words for it!

i cnt believe ppl are so cruel..

i liked this alot!..great job!!

<3 Aly

Wow i can relate to that poem
i hope its noting u had to go though tho
great job with this poem
5/5

I liked this poem. It was VERY well written and emotional. So much pain.
Amazing job :)

This is the worst thing to ever happen to a person... so sad... you write so well

I can relate to that i hope you really didnt have to go through that bc i kno how it feels. it takes alot of guts to write about that i cnt even do that.