Comments : Save Me From Me

  • 13 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I feel like this way too often. I truly understanding the line about perfecting the art of laughter. Also, your line about rainbows was perfect. It was original and really struck the imagination and provided such beautiful imagery for the mind. I enjoyed this!

  • 13 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    Wow. I liked how in the beginning u were talking about that isn't really u that it was just an act. I mean the whole poem is like that but I think that the 1st 2 stanza's r really good. 5/5