Kail, you aren't ugly or fat. And I know this poem was written for Jerry and if he's stupid enough to not notice how beautiful and amazing you are, then he's not worth your time. Now, I know you and you'll be blabbing about him again tomorrow, but I'm glad you got your feelings out in this poem. lol

I see its a venting poem, well i love it! love that you have let it all out. its out of you and free. not tearing inside and causing you pain or .... hmmm discomfort? yeah.

well excellent. this was well excecuted. keep writing, talent must be your middle name.

5/5 David