I love descriptive u are!! and your emotion is so strong in every poem!! im loving your work! dont ever change it! as for work... i dont think it needs any but thats just me!

You are really descriptive, its great.
me myself see nothing in need of change.
all i can say is you capture the real deal, nothing fake here.

This was really good, i couldn't find many mistakes, it was .. well done. Bravo! :)
Keep it up.
*Chaotic Angel*
5/5