Nice work Josh! I really know what you mean though, about going to sleep with all that weight on your mind...then falling asleep, and it's gone, entering a world where everything feels right, if only for a second...then...BAM. I also liked your word choice...it seems that usually when people use more sophisticated language it flows better and paints a thourough picture. Keep it up.
Take care,
Ignoris

I like it! 5 ^_-

I like it! 5 ^_-

Really great job ! 5/5