"Emotions Get The Best Of Me
But They Won't Tonight.
They Always Seem To Use Me
But, This Time I Think I'll Fight." <<with that first stanza it really got my attention, like i wanted to know more what you were talking about. what's she ganna do? whats going on? that sorta thing. great beginning

the third stanza was good as well, the whats-her-name kinda made me grin, 'cause it sounded like you were getting fed up and wanting to slap someone. which led well to the fourth part.

and all the rest was really good and flowing. i loved the ending (last two stanza's) they were good because the words you put in snapped at the girl you were talking about and that was easily caught.

terrific read. 5/5

~tia