Wow michelle! u got some good stuff!

It's true when I say
you make me smile,
I'm gonna let you see the real me
but it might take a wile.

sounds like my theme right there
really good wording couple of spelling errors but it didn't bother me
5/5

Wow great work!
I kinda.. in a way, felt the same.
I said i quit on guys.
I was done...until HE came along.
and took all my doubt away.

You did really good. and i really love the opening line of this poem! great work! :]

Wow i thought this poem was different to most and I it was really interesting =]
Great job, it's a nice piece