Comments : Our Parting

  • 15 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    "Spray from the falls caught the sunlight.
    Glittering halo."

    Beautifully written and a great way to start off the poem.
    This was my favorite part cause of how descriptive it was.
    Any good poem can take you to a certain place thus allowing you to see the true beauty of poetry.This line definately did that for me.

    All in all, I did enjoy reading this and thought it was done well indeed. 5/5