really great job, you rhymed that very well, I just don' tunderstand if the mom came in there, why didn't she save her daughter?...well anyways, i really liked that one, I know hat i can realte cutting. but stay strong ok! :(

Love,
Danielle

Hey Goot It caz i was doin a random search and came across your poems i hope you dont mind! read my poems and let me no wat u think k! i love your poems

~Flea~
Goot i'm sorry if i don't support you when i'm needed not that you ever seem to need me any more but i am here to help you any time... i may not show it all the time... but really you know i'm there for ya...if you ever harmed yourself again or killed yourself... you know i would die and meet you after death... where ever that may be... i'll be with you every where i'm here and there for you...

goot i love you as a friend your the closest person to me...but we seem to be slowly drifting apart...

~Luv Flea~