OMG it was really sad.. i loved it lots!! great job the emmotion really came out!!!

That was a really good poem. I Loved it.

You did a great job. you really made me feel for the little boy.

Wow! so sad and very real. i love this poem, you did a great job writing about the darkness in this world. keep it up =]

So Emotional Reaminds me of a Song REALLY GOOD POEM nearly made me cry :[
Good Job ^-^

Ash :)

Lol This Is my favourite one of yours Lol
I LOVE IT I WILL COMMENT IT SO MANY TIMES

Omg tis is a great poem... i almost started crying...