Nicely written....

**Today was your birthday.
so to celebrate I do the usaual.
I eat the traditional peparoni pizza.**
ack.. i 've got a tradition with someone like that.. even though the other isnt.. just seems right to continu.

**Cousin Jeremy why?
Why did you have to take your life?
And leave all your family behind to cry.**
i thought leaves the reader curious.. for the word - take-.. leaves him wondering the meaning behind..

very touching poem.. its always good to right about those we've lost, and love.

Awww..im sorry..my cousin died from a motorcycle accident..so i didnt really get to no him or hang out with him..so i no how u feel..but good poem..5/5

I'm so sorry darling...just remember that he is in somewhere better now,he is in HEAVEN...
It was a very sad and touchable poem:(