Very good poem i liked reading it very much.

Some lines seem to be forced in rhymes. and the last few lines sound so familliar, ive probably read this poem before - probably even comented on it, it wouldnt suprise me, i lose track of who i have commented on.

Not a bad read - IBE

I like the simplicity of the whole poem. the use of uncomplicated words to show how you feel. i really enjoyed reading this, tho im not sure if enjoyed is the right word cause the poem is kinda sad, but i know you know what i mean. :D

Iv loved it