Wow i really love this poem wonderful job!
5/5

That was beautiful

"He would take me out
And look in my eyes
And make promises
That turned into lies"

That stanza was by for my favorite. Beatiful, clever, and just amazing.

I have just one suggestion , though. The flow is beatiful, but when you say " Of golden wheat", it gets a little choppy. Try "Of fresh golden wheat".

Just one teensy bitty word would make it absolutey perfect! Do you know what an accomplishment that is? You should be soooooooo proud! Five out of five!

Keep on writing!

-Lilly