Outstanding emotional work- I love it - You definitely have my vote! I love the title as well and the bit about for children and how he necer cared...5/5 I'd love to see more- This is now on my favourite poems list - I just love it. It provoked emotion, the structure and layout was incredible and you could relate to this.

Chinwe
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One thing I disagree in.. The daughter, for whom she had first given all, was so like, but Alfie is always there to catch her if she'd fall..
there that was better.. Loved it nevertheless. 5/5.

Very touching....