Hey this was really good. i really liked it. ur a great writer. great job

Ok, first of all... first glance, it looks very daunting, the big block of texts and the capitals.

But the actual words, ohmygosh... beautiful! I loved it all! The rhythm is great, and the word choice is even better. Many girls can relate to this because so many people have had their hearts broken.

*adds to favourites*

Keep it up =)
Lizzy, xxxx