A very sad tale, one that 'descends' (your word) deeper in sadness.

I am confused to what the last line in the first stanza signifies, is it the number that is unlucky?

In the second stanza I like the 'well' metaphor, great image too!

Third Stanza, this so profound and a central focal point of the piece, one which is nicely referred to at the end. :)

Fourth stanza, this has blown me away. The questions it raises are so deep. Earning scars and vs stealing bones, a great debate!

Fifth stanza, 'It takes me back..' I like the way you repeat this, as it really drums home your emotional message.

As I mention earlier, finishing off with the focal point is an excellent way of finishing this excellent piece.

Well done

Michael

I can relate to this in a twisted way with one of my exes. i dont know if thats what you were intending but thats what i recieved. Another good emotional piece, this one felt like a whole piece to me.
If all of your poems are based on a new life experience good luck to you bro it seems to be more changing then mine