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  • 11 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Biya... inspired by this poem...

    Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    This is goood.... really i like this....:)

    Broken heart doesn't really pretend
    It tells you that its your friend 5/4

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    If you want to increase the love between you two then tell your love that the depth of my love is the same as yours.If you want more depth of my love then increase your depth of love.The more you love me,the more depth of my love you will have.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rasheed Khokhar

    Dear Abeera....:)
    Today I read your composed poems
    Really it is good choices....
    You will lead
    If you intend

    Broken eyes shed
    Aware you, tears will defend

    I like This....
    RASHEED

  • 11 years ago

    by kelleyana

    I like this poem, it is well expressive.