Comments : Im missing you

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    I soooo love this poem!!! i give it a 5/5!!! XD

  • Awwww i loved this

    keep up the amazing work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A beautifully written poem. So tender and full of emotion ... and yet so sad.I loved it. The ending just touched my heart...

    "Does some other lover rest
    beneath a seductive, smooth caress,
    to bask in your warmth and tenderness,
    leaving me bereft.....
    I can only guess.... "

    A sad, but beautiful write. Well done.