Amazing work. 5/5

This is one of the sadest poems I have read. Poems about suicide always get to me, they tug at all that is insecure in the depths of my mind. They remind me of times long ago when such thoughts and indeed actions caused me such emotional turmoil. Thankfully I have journeyed through to the other side and I must say it is nice here and I hope to stay for many years to come.

I like the way you repeat nothing phases, it really tightens up the deep profoundess within in the lines.

Well done

Michael

Ur poem is awesome bcoz u wrote it perfectly..
It's also well-written and well-expressed..
I liked it..
Good job,keep it up...

Stop with the talent JESUS

Soft touches are apart from this
As are all the kindness she's missed
There was a way around this for her
But she didnt want it.

CUT IT OUT!

Nothing phases her as she rearranges her murder
Nothing phases her in a world where the shotgun is her only friend
Nothing phases her in a world where she doesnt even feel alive
She pulls the trigger

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING