This is a well written poem. 5/5

Wow. great pace in this poem really kept me intriuged to read more.

well done

OK what the hell... why did you all of the sudden stop writing and repeating this crap over and over again???

I been reading your poems and i really like them alot there great. also good that your still putting new 1's up. if u want some1 to talk 2 i will be happy 2 get a new friend if u like i have an msn. keep the writing up!