Quite a little gem of a poem you have here. I really enjoyed the nature/God aspect of it and giving him credit for the beauty. I do however feel that with a little work and restructuring this poem could much more amazing. It distracted from the poem a little to have all the commas, they are unecessary. Please accept this as only a small critique of making this poem more powerful. It is only my opinion and nothing more.
You have an amazing ability to write and I can see that with this poem. I am anticipating reading more as I have seen that you are fairly new to this. I pray you do not take offense in the criticism offered and think you will enjoy this community of poets helping each other.

Thank You,
Kay

THat was pretty cool it was liek a nature poem w/ liek a twist of god in it