Timmy, this was ridiculously sweet. It made me smile, which is interesting after reading jesse's poems which made me want to cry. the flow was cute. it's just..haha. adorable. ^.^ good job.

Awwwww how sweet! that is so adorable! 5/5

This is so cute.:)

I must say, I do not like the spacing, here:
"She fills me with joy

Beyond belief"

Couldn't it be:
"She fills me with joy
Beyond belief"?

Just a suggestion!

Overall, this piece has a great flow.
It made me smile.:)

~Missy

Short, simple, and yes as the people before me stated, very sweet.Fantastic job.