I put glare instead of stare because i find that by saying stare (its more of a person looking without any meaning like ur daydreaming) whereas here glare (i wrote it in the verb sense not the noun) it means ''to look at with a fixed glazed'' thank you so much for your input and for helping out

I've found this poem pretty decent. Good read for its flow. Well written!

Yh i thought it had a gd flow, was a gd read =D

This is a good poem me likey

Wow... great poem : D

I really liked this, pretty much everyone can relate to it, well adults anyhow lol, 5/5, Em