Comments : Ascension

  • 15 years ago

    by rebeccasarah

    Aww, I Loved this!

    "Hearts that were aching
    Souls that were torn
    Now pieced together
    And somehow reborn"

    I think this is my favorite stanza, although they are all great, this one seems to be saying, that even though you were once hurt, its all better now. You're still able to love again, and I find it motivating.

    This poem has extremely good flow, and is just overall, amazing :)
    Please, keep writing.
    5/5