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Well all d stanzas were gr8 n nicely composed..

keep it up..

Best wishz...

Karan

RL
You managed to put so much in this piece.

Peace - screams aloud!
Garland of grenades
Adorns crimson shroud.

This stanza just seems to scream.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

It is hard to point out to say which is the best stanza of this poem. Honestly, I've found each stanza so very powerful and true that I just can't have anymore words to say. One of the best poems of this site. I love your writing.