I really like this poem it would be better if you used a paragraph formation but I could understand it so that's fine

I think u did a good job we all have our own way of expressing ourselves and putting things down and i feel u did jus that! nice rhyme scheme keep up the good work! 5/5

p.s.- feel free to comment or critique any of my poems if u want to :-)

This was awesome. I loved it. the only thing i can say is the set up of it..
But apart from that .. amazing write. 5/5

Aww thats so sad, forgiveness is hard, especially when its someone you never thought would do something. but it does come, and you said it yourself, life does go on.

great poem xx