Aw i love this.. its so adorable.. you did a great job with it and it made me smile the whole time :) 5/5

Good poem. I must say, you write better poetry than I do. :P Man, like everyone writes better poetry than mine. Check mine out. >_< They suck so bad.
Anyway, just wanted to say that you did a really good job with this poem. Keep up the good work!

Awww that is so cute, the jill part.

Lol this poem is cute :)