I love the way you express yourself..
with your words you made me feel as your feeling.. its deep

Great job, i really enjoyed reading this. Shanik

I really enjoyed reading this poem, you were able to express yourself very well!

This poem really puts some things into reality,

My skin was coated in black
Black represents death
You asked who died?
I said me
You replied but you're still alive
I may be walking like I'm alive, but I'm dead inside
A painted smile on my face, some things are best left unsaid

^^ well written-i enjoyed this part

Damn! I LOVED THAT ONE!!! ^_^

Really beautiful.
"A painted smile on my face, some things are best left unsaid" - Most things in my life are best left unsaid.
You have a wonderful talent.
5/5, Nice work

Another amazing poem!! =)
You write really good and i like your style of writing :)

You should check out my poem "Make up disguise".. it is really not the same but i thought a lot about it when i reald your poem! =)